Friday, July 6, 2012

Special Treat for my Blog Followers!

So I think half of the point of having a blog is being able to reward the fans / readers who are particularly dedicated and who make what I do worth it.

I've posted the first alternate ending of Venus School of Sex here (clicky).  The entire last chapter has been submitted to Literotica, but it won't be out for a couple of days (it always takes at least that long, sometimes longer over the weekend) so I wanted to do something for all of you who have been so supportive of me and saying such nice things about this series! It really means a lot.

I want to make reading this blog worth it, so the other thing I'm doing is letting you know about my promotions... when Venus School comes out for Kindle I will announce it and also run a promotion to make it free for the first couple of days. Someone asked me if I will be charging for the subsequent Venus Series books.  The answer is yes I will cuz a girl's gotta earn some dough and this is part of how I've chosen to supplement my living, but I will also run the free promotion for the first day that they're each made available... and of course make sure that this blog is duly updated =)

In that spirit, tomorrow you will be able to download my erotic short stories for free.  They're revised and expanded, but not entirely new works.  Unfortunately I can't do this with all of my stuff, but I can with the short story compilation and I will with future works. And as long as you're keeping up with the blog, I'll make sure you know about it!

Early Bird of Sex ;)

I really do feel like the early bird, considering that I'm getting things done a lot faster than I thought I would! I am currently about halfway through the last alternate ending for Venus School, and I'm really hoping to get the story submitted to Literotica by tonight.  I also did a quick update on my Venus Series page (accessible at the top of this blog) to reflect my goal release dates for the Kindle.  I plan to be working on getting it ready for Kindle this weekend.  Yay!

I will admit, the first two endings go by a little bit faster than I might have liked, but that's because I wanted to make sure that I led up to (what I see as) the grand finale ;) It's been really interesting writing three different endings. 

I'm about 2/3 of the way through the third chapter of Sarah's Private Dick.  So far these chapters are much longer than chapters for my Lit stories normally are, but I think that's because I'm doing a lot more with the plot and characters.  Thoroughly enjoying it too.  I'm almost to the part where I think things are going to start really heating up, so that makes me happy.

If you're wondering where I'm getting my covers from, I found this great site called BigStock.com where you can buy the rights to images.  Also, if you use this link to shop then you're supposed to get 50% off: http://bigstock.refr.cc/B8NPGVP any image.

 Anyway, before I get back to work here's a sneak peek at another one of the endings:


When Hilary trotted off to the bar to order another drink, Jessica was left alone for a moment. Sighing she wondered whether or not she should just leave.  It was just too hard to be out and seeing men without comparing them to her instructors for last week.

"Hello," said a deep voice to her side. Jessica looked up, startled, into a pair of warm brown eyes. It was the two guys that had reminded her the most of Flood and Fire.  Up close they were even more good looking, and she felt the first stirrings of interest in her body. Well that was new and welcome.  Definitely the first time it had happened since she got home.  Was it pure serendipity that there were two guys who resembled the instructors that she'd fallen for at her firm? Hilary would call it a sign.


"Hi," she said, smiling up at them.  What a difference the Venus School had made; a month ago she would've ducked and run, way too shy to even respond to them. In fact, she was pretty sure that she recognized these guys, and that she had done exactly that the last time they'd tried to talk to her.  That was pretty much her standard response to any guy that she thought was out of her league. It was too scary to talk to them and not worth the effort of trying to get over that.  Now, even knowing they were out of her league, she found that she wasn't scared.  Deep down she now knew that she was sexy, she knew what she wanted from men and just because they were gorgeous it wasn't going to send her running for the hills.  "I'm Jessica."


"Justin," said the one who had said hello to her.


"Chris," said the other one, sidling around him so that they were standing side by side.

Wow, another Doublemint duo.  They looked similar, although they had different noses, Justin had higher cheekbones and Chris' eyebrows were more arched than Justin's.  Very cute, both of them. Sexy too.  Okay, it might be worth sticking around if gorgeous men were going to come talk to her.  She wondered why they hadn't come over before; normally two guys wanted to find two girls to talk to, and Hilary still hadn't returned from the bar. 

"Nice to meet you," she said.


"We snuck up on you this time," Chris said, grinning at her playfully.  "Didn't want you to run again when you saw us coming."

Justin smiled, but gave Chris a warning look. That was another difference between them, Chris was obviously more playful and flirtatious whereas Justin had that dominant, "I'm going to smile at you and you're going to melt" thing going on. A thought tugged at Jessica but she dismissed it as too silly for words.

Out of the corner of her eye she saw Hilary, obviously abandoning her to the two men, as she walked over and joined another group of their co-workers who were chatting again. Traitor.  But her best friend didn't look at her, so Jessica didn't have the opportunity to glare.  Heat pooled in her stomach as she looked back at the men and realized that she was the focus of two very intense gazes.  They looked like they wanted to eat her up.  Or was she just imagining it because they reminded her so much of two other men?


Feeling overheated Jessica decided that it was time to retreat, even if they made fun of her.


"Well, I hate to tell you, but I think it's time for me to go," she said with a smile to take away the sting of her words.  "I was only here for a quick drink."

Justin frowned, his eyes going to the empty martini glass in her hand. "How many of those have you had?"


"Just two."

"You just finished that one.  You can leave in thirty minutes, after you have a glass of water."

He said it so simply, so matter of fact, that Jessica actually nodded before she caught herself. Then she gasped at his audacity, and her response to it.  Heat flashed in her eyes. How dare he?


"I'm fine," she snapped.

"Come on, let's go dance," said Chris, moving to her side and tugging at her arm.  Justin nodded at her, approving this activity.  Between the two of them they had her completely mentally off balance, Chris distracting her from Justin's demand, Justin distracting her from Chris' manhandling.  She felt like she was being swept up like a tiny shell in an ocean wave, and she had no idea when she was going to come crashing down onto the sand.


Less then two minutes after Chris had her out on the dance floor, his body moving so close to hers but without rubbing against her in a lewd way, Justin had joined them and he had a glass of water for her.  Jessica glared at him but took the glass of water.  Whatever. She was thirsty and it wasn't a bad idea. After about half a glass she was debating trying to retreat, but Justin put his hands on her hips from behind, holding her in place between him and Chris.  Unfortunately her body responded with absolute delight, being sandwiched between the two of them, attuned to her need for sex, her desire to be between two men.


"Drink the whole thing," he growled into her ear, and heat shivered through her.  She had the straw in her mouth before she had time to think about it. Dammit.  Apparently going to the school had also brought out her submissive tendencies completely, whether she was having sex or not.


She was about to pull the straw away from her mouth when Chris put his fingers under her chin, holding it in place. His eyes were smoldering with sex and lust.


"Suck," he said. Jessica automatically sucked in a mouthful of water. And then sputtered as she tried to breathe it in instead of swallowing.

Behind her, Justin laughed, wrapping his arms around her as she coughed.  Ugh. How unsexy. 


"Sorry sweetheart," Chris said, his eyes dancing. "I thought you'd know to swallow."

Jessica glared at him about to take him apart for inappropriate sexual inneundo to a co-worker, when Justin's fingers stroked the sides of her hips.  She had a sudden in drawn breathe down her burning throat as heat flashed through her. There was an answering flame in Chris' eyes, pinning her back against Justin. Whom she suddenly realized had a throbbing erection, pressing against her ass.  Part of her wanted to move away... the other part of her wanted to grind back into him.

Her body was primed for sex. She'd gone from having multiple orgasms a day and amazing sexual experiences for two weeks straight, to nothing for the past 5 days.  Now she was in a fantasy situation, with two men, who were both acting interested in her, and had her caught between them.  The situation was so similar to her experience at the Venus School that her mind finally, reluctantly, caught up with what her body had been trying to tell her from the very beginning.


"You... it can't be... You're..." She floundered for words, too afraid to actually say them. Chris moved forward, trapping her between them, and she could feel her heart beating rapid-fire in her chest, her eyes were opened to their biggest as he loomed over her.  The sexual response was immediate, and she tightened her thighs together as her pussy flooded.  He glanced up and over her shoulder with amused and wary eyes.


"I think she's figured it out," he said.  Jessica gasped.  It was true.


Before she could react Justin was already moving, tugging on her arm and pulling her toward the exit.  "Let's go somewhere else."

Chris played rear guard.  No one noticed that they were leaving.


Thursday, July 5, 2012

Foot in Mouth

*sigh*

Okay, so I think I've mentioned before how sometimes characters can take on a life of their own and do things that I don't expect?

Well after I wrote that whole blog yesterday about how I wasn't going to do alternate endings for Venus School because I couldn't see the characters doing anything but the one ending that I had originally planned for them anyway, Chris and Justin got all insulted that I thought they weren't each good enough on their own and had to go about proving me wrong.  Jessica and I both feel like Ado Annie from Oklahoma, we cain't say no... but I did limit their individual times and told them that they had to be quick about getting their solo careers in, because this chapter was already taking plenty long for me to write!

So that's what I'm working on, almost exclusively today. I'm about halfway through the last chapter.  If I finish it I'll start working on Chapter 3 of Sarah's Private Dick - Chapter 2 is now available on Literotica. Still no sex, but the story line is moving right along and things are definitely getting steamier.

Here's a little excerpt from what I have so far on the conclusion for Venus School:

Jessica had never been more relieved than when Greg was pulled away from her.  Obviously more than a little drunk, he’d been getting more and more handsy, and Hilary had been too involved in what looked like actual fun dancing with Bryan to notice immediately. And Jessica hadn’t wanted to ruin the good connection for her friend, so she’d been trying to keep it quiet.

As she looked up at the broad shoulders in front of her, the dark wavy hair of the man who had come to her rescue, Hilary was suddenly standing at her side, babbling apologies for not noticing sooner what was happening.

“Back off,” she heard her rescuer say, and Jessica froze.  That silhouette… that voice… When he turned and looked down at her with those commanding dark eyes, she knew for sure.

“Flood,” she whispered.  Although it was far too loud for him to have heard her over the music, it was obvious that he knew what she had just said, that she recognized him.

Her entire world turned over in a series of flip flops, sizzling in her stomach.  Not only did she recognize him as Mr. Flood, but she realized that he worked with her too. She’d seen him and another devastatingly handsome guy hanging out with her work crowd at happy hours before… oh my god, that must have been Fire. The first instinct was to look around for Fire, wondering if he was here too… he couldn’t be far away, the two of them were such a team. Surely if Mr. Flood was here than Mr. Fire was as well.

Wednesday, July 4, 2012

Happy Fourth of July!

Yay Fourth of July! One of my favorite holidays. I love fireworks. And funnel cake. And watching Will Smith punch out an alien.  Ever since that movie came out I always have the President's Independence Day speech stuck in my head all day on the fourth =) Lots of fun!

Sooooo... I have inadvertently created confusion for people who don't read my blog. Venus School Chapter 20 is out and a lot of people are already asking that it not be the last chapter... oops.  I should have written an author's note or something at the end of it, but since I always (at least I think almost always) put the word "conclusion" in the story description anytime I write a last chapter I thought people would understand. But then I realized that the story description says "last class" which can be kind of ambiguous. Oops.

Something for fun... I've started to create new "pages" for my blog. If you look up at the top of my blog it now says "Home" and then next to it says "Poker Loser Trilogy" and "Venus Rising Series". If you're ever curious about what's going on with those Kindle books, you can just click on those pages for updates. =) This is me trying to streamline my blog and make it more interesting / easier to find the things that people might want. Yay!

If you ever have any suggestions or think that you know of a better way, please email me! (goldeniangel@gmail.com) I'm new to this whole blogging thing and I'm still trying to figure things out.

Have a safe and happy holiday Americans! For those of you who aren't, have a great Hump day!

Monday, July 2, 2012

Almost Done with Venus!

Today I finished and submitted the second to last chapter of Venus School... it's going to be so hard to say goodbye to Jessica, Chris and Justin! Although of course I'm not really saying a complete goodbye since I'm going to be working on a follow-up Kindle eBook for them, but at the same time it does make me sad to know that I'm finishing the series.

Continuing to work on finished up Venus School and also on the next chapter of Sarah's Private Dick =)

Kind of amused at the age controversy that's apparently surrounding A Little Knowledge right now.  That one came out FAST! I've known a lot of people who were incredibly naive all the way through high school, and they weren't even sheltered like the two main characters were.  I still remember having to argue with my best friend, when she was fifteen, because she would not believe me that a blow job was the same thing as sucking dick.

By the way, her demonstration of what she thought a "blow" job consisted of cracked me up and probably would have horrified any guy that she tried it on LOL.

And she wasn't even home schooled =P

Not that there aren't plenty of people who are home schooled who aren't ignorant at all. But I have also seen home schooling used in an abusive kind of sheltering way, in which the children seriously were not socialized and had no idea how to interact with people outside of their own family. Personally I find it sad, but it was also part of what drew me to this particular reader's request. My opinion is that too much sheltering and not enough knowledge can lead to unforeseen consequences, because people like to experiment. And sometimes we just do things, knowing that we shouldn't.

At any rate, it was an interesting story to write and the responses that it's garnering are fascinating to me. My next series, once I'm done with Venus School, is also going to be Incest/Taboo, by a reader request.  That one should be really interesting, although hopefully people are kinder in their comments about the sexiness of the fantasy, because she's actually messaging me rather often with ideas and ways to round out her fantasy.

It makes it interesting and keeps me from having the same character over and over =) Nice to be able to branch out and try some new things!

Sunday, July 1, 2012

Incest/Taboo and Requests

Okay... so first things first. Chapter 19 of Venus School is out on Literotica =) I'm about halfway through Chapter 20, writing wise. YAY! Although it's making me a little sad cuz so many people in the story are depressed about having the week of school end.  But I'm also really excited for Chapter 21... when Jessica goes home! Also, the first Chapter to my new series, Sarah's Private Dick is also out. It doesn't have any sex in it, but those of you who like the longer plot lines will (I hope) enjoy it. 

Anyway... moving on to my main topic of the day, because I've had two recent requests for some interesting Incest/Taboo story lines.  I submitted one yesterday because it was a stand alone story. Nice and easy to write and flowed rather well.  The next one is going to be my next series.

This category always fascinates me, mostly because it's not a fantasy I've ever had but it's hands down the one I get the most requests for.  And the one I originally had the most trouble writing for.  When I first started writing in the category it was because I had entered the Survivorphile contest and had to try my hand at writing in every category (although I could and did enter the lottery to get out of writing in some categories, I needed that for the audio / illustrated categories because I didn't have any audio equipment or good pictures).  The first few times I tried writing in it, everybody getting it on was a step-relation.  After awhile I just started leaving the step off and writing the same kind of story.

The forbidden part of the story seems to be what interests people, as far as I can tell. The reluctance, the seduction, the struggle to do something that the characters know isn't right.  But it's not as violent (usually) as the Non-Consent category, and there's more of a struggle than there is with Mind Control. It's not my kink, but I try to fulfill the requests that I get.

My trick for writing them? I picture them as Hentai characters rather than real people. Which is probably why my Incest/Taboo stories tend to have more force in them than a lot of people like. Because I'm not picturing real people LOL.

Yesterday I submitted one of my few Incest/Taboo stories where there isn't force. I'm kind of curious what the response will be. The reader request was rather fascinating (to me), about a brother and sister who were home-schooled and so sheltered by their parents that when left alone for a weekend they end up exploring each other's bodies and having sex without really knowing what they were doing.  I thought that was a really interesting set-up and not at all my usual, which made it fun (the series I'll be writing next is more along the lines of my usual, but with a few twists and I'm actively working with the requesting party to put it together, which makes it fun and challenging in a whole new way for me)

The standalone, A Little Knowledge, should be out in a couple of days, but for fun, here's an excerpt:

"Want to play doctor?" he asked hopefully.

Doctor was a game that they'd started years and years ago, like most little boys and girls, giggling over the differences in their anatomy. But they hadn't played doctor in years.  It was a half remembered game for them, one from their childhood that they hadn't been able to continue playing as they'd gotten older, knowing, with that sure instinct of naughty children, that if they were caught, their parents wouldn't approve. Not at all. So they hadn't played.

Heather lit up.  Doctor had been one of her favorite games growing up, and playing an old game seemed the perfect way to get closer to her big brother again. Mom had gotten possessive of her as she'd gotten older, and while she loved spending time with her mother, she missed her brother.  Now they could return to the times when they'd been so close growing up. And she had the perfect suggestion to make.

"Can we play new doctor?"

"New doctor?" her brother asked, perplexed.

Heather nodded, her blonde pony-tail bobbing eagerly.  She looked so cute in her pink button down shirt and white linen slacks. "I went to a new doctor last week remember? Because I'm a woman now."

"Oh yeah," Blake remembered that, although he hadn't realized that there was anything new about this kind of doctor. "Did they do things differently?"

Giggling, Heather nodded. "Lots! Come on, I'll show you."

Within twenty minutes Heather was wearing nothing but her bathrobe - which was the closest she could get to the thin paper robe that the doctor had provided - belted in the front and Blake had her lying back on a Lazy boy chair, her pretty slim legs draped over the arms of the chair, spreading her thighs.  As Blake looked down at his sister's naked legs, he could feel his penis stirring... it did that sometimes although he wasn't always sure why.  At night sometimes he would wake up to the most wonderful feeling... but when he'd tried to ask his father about it,  his dad had just told him that they'd have the talk someday and that, in the meantime, he shouldn't touch himself to try and make that wonderful feeling happen.

"Okay, so now you open my robe and you massage my breasts." 

Blake flipped open his sister's robe, exposing the creamy ivory mounds tipped with sweet pink nipples.  Now his penis was swelling inside of his pants, making him uncomfortable... he wanted... something. He didn't know what. 

"Like this?" he asked, reaching out and grabbing both of them, one in each hand. They were soft and yet firm, he squeezed them and rubbed them as if he was rubbing her shoulders. Heather let out a little moan that sounded so nice.