Friday, July 6, 2012

Early Bird of Sex ;)

I really do feel like the early bird, considering that I'm getting things done a lot faster than I thought I would! I am currently about halfway through the last alternate ending for Venus School, and I'm really hoping to get the story submitted to Literotica by tonight.  I also did a quick update on my Venus Series page (accessible at the top of this blog) to reflect my goal release dates for the Kindle.  I plan to be working on getting it ready for Kindle this weekend.  Yay!

I will admit, the first two endings go by a little bit faster than I might have liked, but that's because I wanted to make sure that I led up to (what I see as) the grand finale ;) It's been really interesting writing three different endings. 

I'm about 2/3 of the way through the third chapter of Sarah's Private Dick.  So far these chapters are much longer than chapters for my Lit stories normally are, but I think that's because I'm doing a lot more with the plot and characters.  Thoroughly enjoying it too.  I'm almost to the part where I think things are going to start really heating up, so that makes me happy.

If you're wondering where I'm getting my covers from, I found this great site called where you can buy the rights to images.  Also, if you use this link to shop then you're supposed to get 50% off: any image.

 Anyway, before I get back to work here's a sneak peek at another one of the endings:

When Hilary trotted off to the bar to order another drink, Jessica was left alone for a moment. Sighing she wondered whether or not she should just leave.  It was just too hard to be out and seeing men without comparing them to her instructors for last week.

"Hello," said a deep voice to her side. Jessica looked up, startled, into a pair of warm brown eyes. It was the two guys that had reminded her the most of Flood and Fire.  Up close they were even more good looking, and she felt the first stirrings of interest in her body. Well that was new and welcome.  Definitely the first time it had happened since she got home.  Was it pure serendipity that there were two guys who resembled the instructors that she'd fallen for at her firm? Hilary would call it a sign.

"Hi," she said, smiling up at them.  What a difference the Venus School had made; a month ago she would've ducked and run, way too shy to even respond to them. In fact, she was pretty sure that she recognized these guys, and that she had done exactly that the last time they'd tried to talk to her.  That was pretty much her standard response to any guy that she thought was out of her league. It was too scary to talk to them and not worth the effort of trying to get over that.  Now, even knowing they were out of her league, she found that she wasn't scared.  Deep down she now knew that she was sexy, she knew what she wanted from men and just because they were gorgeous it wasn't going to send her running for the hills.  "I'm Jessica."

"Justin," said the one who had said hello to her.

"Chris," said the other one, sidling around him so that they were standing side by side.

Wow, another Doublemint duo.  They looked similar, although they had different noses, Justin had higher cheekbones and Chris' eyebrows were more arched than Justin's.  Very cute, both of them. Sexy too.  Okay, it might be worth sticking around if gorgeous men were going to come talk to her.  She wondered why they hadn't come over before; normally two guys wanted to find two girls to talk to, and Hilary still hadn't returned from the bar. 

"Nice to meet you," she said.

"We snuck up on you this time," Chris said, grinning at her playfully.  "Didn't want you to run again when you saw us coming."

Justin smiled, but gave Chris a warning look. That was another difference between them, Chris was obviously more playful and flirtatious whereas Justin had that dominant, "I'm going to smile at you and you're going to melt" thing going on. A thought tugged at Jessica but she dismissed it as too silly for words.

Out of the corner of her eye she saw Hilary, obviously abandoning her to the two men, as she walked over and joined another group of their co-workers who were chatting again. Traitor.  But her best friend didn't look at her, so Jessica didn't have the opportunity to glare.  Heat pooled in her stomach as she looked back at the men and realized that she was the focus of two very intense gazes.  They looked like they wanted to eat her up.  Or was she just imagining it because they reminded her so much of two other men?

Feeling overheated Jessica decided that it was time to retreat, even if they made fun of her.

"Well, I hate to tell you, but I think it's time for me to go," she said with a smile to take away the sting of her words.  "I was only here for a quick drink."

Justin frowned, his eyes going to the empty martini glass in her hand. "How many of those have you had?"

"Just two."

"You just finished that one.  You can leave in thirty minutes, after you have a glass of water."

He said it so simply, so matter of fact, that Jessica actually nodded before she caught herself. Then she gasped at his audacity, and her response to it.  Heat flashed in her eyes. How dare he?

"I'm fine," she snapped.

"Come on, let's go dance," said Chris, moving to her side and tugging at her arm.  Justin nodded at her, approving this activity.  Between the two of them they had her completely mentally off balance, Chris distracting her from Justin's demand, Justin distracting her from Chris' manhandling.  She felt like she was being swept up like a tiny shell in an ocean wave, and she had no idea when she was going to come crashing down onto the sand.

Less then two minutes after Chris had her out on the dance floor, his body moving so close to hers but without rubbing against her in a lewd way, Justin had joined them and he had a glass of water for her.  Jessica glared at him but took the glass of water.  Whatever. She was thirsty and it wasn't a bad idea. After about half a glass she was debating trying to retreat, but Justin put his hands on her hips from behind, holding her in place between him and Chris.  Unfortunately her body responded with absolute delight, being sandwiched between the two of them, attuned to her need for sex, her desire to be between two men.

"Drink the whole thing," he growled into her ear, and heat shivered through her.  She had the straw in her mouth before she had time to think about it. Dammit.  Apparently going to the school had also brought out her submissive tendencies completely, whether she was having sex or not.

She was about to pull the straw away from her mouth when Chris put his fingers under her chin, holding it in place. His eyes were smoldering with sex and lust.

"Suck," he said. Jessica automatically sucked in a mouthful of water. And then sputtered as she tried to breathe it in instead of swallowing.

Behind her, Justin laughed, wrapping his arms around her as she coughed.  Ugh. How unsexy. 

"Sorry sweetheart," Chris said, his eyes dancing. "I thought you'd know to swallow."

Jessica glared at him about to take him apart for inappropriate sexual inneundo to a co-worker, when Justin's fingers stroked the sides of her hips.  She had a sudden in drawn breathe down her burning throat as heat flashed through her. There was an answering flame in Chris' eyes, pinning her back against Justin. Whom she suddenly realized had a throbbing erection, pressing against her ass.  Part of her wanted to move away... the other part of her wanted to grind back into him.

Her body was primed for sex. She'd gone from having multiple orgasms a day and amazing sexual experiences for two weeks straight, to nothing for the past 5 days.  Now she was in a fantasy situation, with two men, who were both acting interested in her, and had her caught between them.  The situation was so similar to her experience at the Venus School that her mind finally, reluctantly, caught up with what her body had been trying to tell her from the very beginning.

"You... it can't be... You're..." She floundered for words, too afraid to actually say them. Chris moved forward, trapping her between them, and she could feel her heart beating rapid-fire in her chest, her eyes were opened to their biggest as he loomed over her.  The sexual response was immediate, and she tightened her thighs together as her pussy flooded.  He glanced up and over her shoulder with amused and wary eyes.

"I think she's figured it out," he said.  Jessica gasped.  It was true.

Before she could react Justin was already moving, tugging on her arm and pulling her toward the exit.  "Let's go somewhere else."

Chris played rear guard.  No one noticed that they were leaving.


  1. You have to stop teasing me like this though I think this will be my favorite of the three endings (i was never one to choose if I could have both) I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the story to come out I can't wait and what evermprice u put on kindle I will pay just to keep a copy of this story forever

  2. Agreed, I like this ending the best so far.